他们
在城市尽头，没有繁华的街市，闪亮的霓虹；在城市的尽头，只有破旧的棚户区，有饱经生活风霜的生命；在城市的尽头，有他们这样一群人。
让我怎样称呼他们？外来务工人员子女？农民子弟？亦或是农民工二代？不，我不想用这些冰冷的名字称呼他们，我多想叫着他们带着泥土气的乳名，拉着他们的小手，走近他们的生活……
他 们从小生长在故乡的青山绿水中，纯洁的灵魂在田野里抽穗拔节。在山野的风中，他们奔跑着，憧憬着。风从田野中吹过，吹进了城市，为了生计，为了未来，他们 跟从父母来到了城市，在城市的尽头扎下了根。于是习惯了青山绿水的双眸第一次触碰到了高楼大厦、车水马龙。他们不知道怎样穿过六车道的马路，小小的手指怎 么也数不清写字楼的层数。繁华的现代文明不曾给他们带来任何快乐，这一次，却在心上烙下了深深的痕迹。
他们背起书包，小心翼翼地融入城市的生活。可是却在"城市人"异样的眼光中，第一次明白了户口与暂住证的区别。他们都是父母心头的宝啊！却过早地承担了不属于这个年龄的负担。
放学回家，他们做好简单的晚饭，父母还在工地或菜场上劳作；午夜醒来，泪眼中城里的星空没有家乡的明亮；悄悄许愿，希望明天他们的打工子弟小学不会因交不出电费而被查封……
然而，在他们日益长高的身体上，我看到了他们的成长。记得一位记者问一个打工子弟学校的孩子，学成后是否会回到家乡时，小姑娘毫不犹豫地说：当然，一定回去！那一刻，我差点落下泪来，为他们的成长。
记得那年春晚他们稚气的宣言："我们的学校很小，但我们的成绩不差""我们不和城里的孩子比爸爸""北京的2008，也是我们的2008！"他们逐渐成熟，告别昨天的羞怯，开始迎接新的一天。
虽然，他们还在为不多的学费而苦恼；虽然，学校还是交不上水电费；虽然，还有好多体制还不够完善……虽然有好多个"虽然"，但是，只有一个"但是"就足够了，已经有好多视线转向他们，他们正在茁壮地成长。
太阳从地平线上升起，照亮了城市的尽头，照亮了他们的生活。
他们，终将会成为我们。
阅卷老师点评：
满分作文有五大优点，首先，作文将民工子女的生存状态很真实地描绘出来，从农村到城市经历的不自然、不适应，再到他们心态的逐渐成熟，让人感受到一个真实存 在的群体；其次，作文的文字很流畅，可以看出考生具有一定的阅读积累，但是并无炫耀，恰如其分地表现了自己的情感和视野，文字和主题很匹配；第三，总体上 看作文表达了作者对同龄人的同情、关注和企盼，言为心声，也正是作文题目要求的体现；第四，这篇文章的描写非常细腻，"小小的手指怎么也数不清写字楼的层 数"；最后，文章关键还写出农民工子女的变化,"他们，终将会成为我们"，考生没有一味抱怨，写出了变化和希望。
Saturday, June 21, 2008
Friday, June 20, 2008
七月的无奈
想想自己大学毕业的时候只忙着找工作了, 也没有象国内大学生那样地疯狂吃喝一顿. 不过提到校园生活倒让我想起一首叫<<七月>>的歌, 很好听.
那一年的寒风中,我化了很浓的妆
第一次牵你的手啊,却装作老练的模样
我等你说,等你说我漂亮
哦,真的,我真的很想
又一年的夜色中,你遮住星星的光
第一次吻我的脸啊,多少有些惊慌
你等我说,说我是你唯一的港
哦,真的,我真的很想
七月的无奈,我们尽量不去想
你说你的山,我说我的水乡
七月的无奈,我们尽量不去讲
哦,真的,也许真的很傻
那一年的大雪中,你轻轻敲我的窗
告诉我你堆的雪人,很像很像我的模样
你等我说,说我真的感动啊
哦,真的,我真的很想
那一年的大雨中,我倚在你的肩上
让雨水渐渐洗去,两情很真的脸庞
我等你说,说你爱的好疯狂
哦,真的,我真的很想
七月的无奈,我们尽量不去想
你说你的山,我说我的水乡
七月的无奈,我们尽量不去讲
哦,真的,七月真的很长
中国的汽油和电费涨价咯
因为全球原油价格上涨和中国能源需求的增加, 中国政府终于决定要给燃油加价了. (因为地震的原因)除了四川省之外, 其他所有省份的汽油, 柴油和电费都有上调.
长春的出租车起价费已经维持>10年的RMB5记录了, 看来不久也要跳一跳了. 应该说在中国生活最惨的就是这些用体力换收入的人了.
长春的出租车起价费已经维持>10年的RMB5记录了, 看来不久也要跳一跳了. 应该说在中国生活最惨的就是这些用体力换收入的人了.
北京公布几个月内的交通管制法
估计在奥运会开幕式前期还要发两颗导弹到天上去散开云雾防止降雨.
On Friday, Beijing's downtown noon skies were a dull grey and smelled faintly of smoke. Chinese readings rated air quality Level 3, or "slightly polluted," which is still on the higher end of readings usually recorded. Three weeks earlier on May 28 Beijing notched an unprecedented Level IV, or "Poor" pollution reading.
我只是希望那些去参加比赛的运动员不要因为北京的气候和污染而感冒和影响成绩...
Thursday, June 19, 2008
Google Street-View Car Got a Ticket
Don't speeding when you drive a Prius - your mileage still goes down even with the electric motor assistance!
Not sure if the guy "expensed" the ticket at Google. =)
Wednesday, June 18, 2008
Why I didn't like Game 6 of the NBA Final
Ok, I need to start by saying I'm not a fan of the Lakers. I'm not even a fan of the Celtics. But this has nothing to do with my dislike of last night's Game 6 NBA final.
Put it simply, the game sucked.
I'm a consumer, a viewer, a person to be entertained, but I didn't get any of the excitement I expected from the game! Long gone those "beat-the-buzzer-jump-shot" from Michael Jordan, or a super-hero's "3-point-play" within the last 2-min that changes the dynamics of the game. The Eastern and Western teams of the NBA create such a big gap in terms of performance difference that it was not even a great final series. I want to see a close-matched game, or a game that was only determined by the last 24-second game play, or maybe Overtime. I want it to be non-predictable - Come on, everyone knows the final was over last night after the 2nd quarter! I want to sit on my coach, chew the potato chips and watch those stupid KIA Motor and E-Trade commercials and get excited when someone made a touch 3-point jump shot!
Kobe was even more disappointing as a MVP of the regular season, just like how Houston Rockets sucked to the bottom with two All-Star (Yao and T-Mac). So the NBA is not as good and entertaining as it used to be. David Stern knows better, and he was smart not to comment that the Celtics was "the world's champion" because they were not (he used to say that at every Championship ceremony). The US Dream Team lost pathetically in the last Olympics and the US basketball is no longer the world's best game.
I feel sad because I am a fan of the NBA. They keep running the commercial says NBA is where amazing happens, but there was nothing amazing in last night's Game 6. Nothing! I fell asleep in 3rd quarter and woke up at the end of the 4th just watch the celebration, and how KG cried and said he was on top of the world.
KG (and Paul and Allen), congratulations to you! You are at the top of the world with a NBA Championship, only that "top of the world" is sinking and losing its altitude...
So what happened to those games I loved?!
Put it simply, the game sucked.
I'm a consumer, a viewer, a person to be entertained, but I didn't get any of the excitement I expected from the game! Long gone those "beat-the-buzzer-jump-shot" from Michael Jordan, or a super-hero's "3-point-play" within the last 2-min that changes the dynamics of the game. The Eastern and Western teams of the NBA create such a big gap in terms of performance difference that it was not even a great final series. I want to see a close-matched game, or a game that was only determined by the last 24-second game play, or maybe Overtime. I want it to be non-predictable - Come on, everyone knows the final was over last night after the 2nd quarter! I want to sit on my coach, chew the potato chips and watch those stupid KIA Motor and E-Trade commercials and get excited when someone made a touch 3-point jump shot!
Kobe was even more disappointing as a MVP of the regular season, just like how Houston Rockets sucked to the bottom with two All-Star (Yao and T-Mac). So the NBA is not as good and entertaining as it used to be. David Stern knows better, and he was smart not to comment that the Celtics was "the world's champion" because they were not (he used to say that at every Championship ceremony). The US Dream Team lost pathetically in the last Olympics and the US basketball is no longer the world's best game.
I feel sad because I am a fan of the NBA. They keep running the commercial says NBA is where amazing happens, but there was nothing amazing in last night's Game 6. Nothing! I fell asleep in 3rd quarter and woke up at the end of the 4th just watch the celebration, and how KG cried and said he was on top of the world.
KG (and Paul and Allen), congratulations to you! You are at the top of the world with a NBA Championship, only that "top of the world" is sinking and losing its altitude...
So what happened to those games I loved?!
Tuesday, June 17, 2008
IE给FF送到蛋糕?!
刚刚下载了FF3.0, 运行还不错, 除了小处不同, 还没有发现很大不同. GOOGLE TOOLBAR要升级, 但也没什么不同.
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